It is somewhat a disappointing to me that the California Common Core Standards for English Language Arts and Literacy in History/Social Studies, Sciences, and Technical Subjects, doesn’t actively support creative fiction writing, or visual media literacy. The standards at the highest level of secondary education, those for grades 11-12, only deal vaguely with creative writing in fiction (through the disorienting dual standard of teaching the techniques non-fiction and/or fiction writing). Although I find much to like in California Common Core Standards overall, I do see an over emphasis on cite and support, evidence-driven writing. This is no surprise to me, this sort of writing supports close reading and other highly testable objectives. In Language Arts, it is much easier to teach, and grade the critique of art than art (not to mention grade it). There are ways to combine the two however.
I do think that Writing Standard Three, in grades 11-12, allows the teacher engage in a lesson in the creative writing genre, and even apply those skills toward creating visual media. Without going too much further, here are some the criteria that a teacher can grade art/creative fiction writing on (in this case, the art form is a kind of narrative writing), from Standard Three:
“Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
a. Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation and its significance, establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events.
b. Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, description, reflection, and multiple plot lines, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.
c. Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a coherent whole and build toward a particular tone and outcome (e.g., a sense of mystery, suspense, growth, or resolution).
d. Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
e. Provide a conclusion that follows from and reflects on what is experienced, observed, or resolved over the course of the narrative.”
I propose that a project-based learning plan could be developed around this standard that allows for differentiation. This project would create a scene in a silent film, in the style of the German Expressionism. German Expressionist films were highly conceptual, with set and music serving as reflections of the mood of the character, stylized to reflect that character’s highly subjective perspective. During their heyday, these films, like Metropolis (1927), featured highly elaborate sets, surreal themes, dialogue, narration, and moody musical scores and soundscapes. You may notice that the creating of this project would engage different types of intelligences (visual-spatial or logical/mathematical in set construction, bodily-kinesthetic in set construction or acting, intrapersonal in directing or acting, interpersonal in writing, musical in the score). I deliberately chose this genre because it relies, by convention, on so many elements (noise/music, set construction/lighting, acting, dialogue and narration) to drive not just the narrative, but also the mood.
The students would self-assemble into two or three large groups to produce this film, and the final product should be short in length, five to ten minutes. The resources available to students to edit films are available through apps on phones, though most schools have some AV resources if required. Teachers should develop a plan and materials to teach their students about the genre. After the students present their film, the class, through a peer-panel grouping format, should question the crew and cast. The teacher might consider standards, besides the California Common Core, like the National Core Arts Standards: A Conceptual Framework for Arts Learning, to use in conjunction with the core standards; to develop a rubric for grading the final product. All students should be held accountable for in some way explaining their artistic choices. The teacher’s rubric should specify that all students would need to create a set and chose or create music and sound that evokes at particular mood experienced by the character(s) of the film, and that acting should reflect the experience of that mood. Although this assignment involves writing the dialogue and narrative, as well as a critique, the teacher could make adaptations for ELL students by allowing them to work in their primary language for the film, provided that there is some translation.